What do you think of my story?

This is from my story Cowboy's Stolen Heart. I have always dreamt of becoming a country music star ever since i was a little girl. I am not sure how i got my talent for singing, but my father says that the angels gave it to me. I had decided to become a country singer when i first listened to Tim McGraw's I Like It I Love It on the radio while i was sitting on my bouncey horse. I would pretend that i was listening to the radio and sing songs by many different artists like Brooks and Dunn, Reba and many others. But now that i am eighteen years old, i know i can make that dream possible. My parents have always supported my dicision to move to Nashville after i graduated from high school. By the way, my name is Sorya Anne Jones. And i am your average everyday Oklahoma cowgirl. I live on a ranch with my parents Ben and Alice Jones in Elk City, Oklahoma. My fater is a well known horse and cattle rancher here in Elk City, and my mom is a nurse at Great Plains Regional Medical Center. Tell me what you think so far.